Passchendaele - Page #001 pencils!

in art •  7 years ago  (edited)

Hey, Steemit! It’s getting late here in the Twin Cities. I’m sitting in a muggy living room listening to The Cramps and formatting some artwork for tonight’s blog post. I caved today and installed the air conditioner. I can’t deal with heat. Cold, I can do all year long […which is why Minneapolis isn’t a problem for me], but you can only take so much clothes off […ask @eveuncovered]. In a couple of weeks, we’re having central air and a industrial grade HEPA filter installed in our home, but for these two weeks, we needed some relief from what is feeling like a very early summer […extra sucky after an extremely late winter because the Spring and Fall are my favorite seasons]. 

Tonight, I wanted to share a page from an ashcan comic book I’m working on with my long time friend @ghostfish. A few months ago, we decided to collaborate on a story I came up with a few years ago while listening to Dan Carlin’s Hardcore History episode “Blue Print for Armageddon”. He went in to painful detail about the lesser known battle of Passchendaele. A living Hell for the soldiers that fought in relentless rain across the fields of France. Conditions so bad that thousands of soldiers […on both sides] lost their lives to the mud that swallowed them.

This story focuses on a German soldier named Otto who shot and killed an Allied Aussie soldier, Ira. Ira, taking a bullet to the face, died instantly and slid down the embankment of a mortar Otto has been stuck in for [assumably] days already. Our story picks up as the threads of Otto’s sanity begin to fray, engaging in a conversation with a clearly deceased Ira. The two talk about life, family and death. The whole time, the water level in the muddy depression rises.

We’re doing this story as an ashcan comic that will be printed in the DIY tradition of Kinko’s or Office Max, then littered across coffee shops and comic shops in the Twin Cities, LA and NYC. I love working with @ghostfish. We’re extremely like minded in the stories we want to tell and the art we appreciate. I’m getting together with him early next week to refine the story and dialog and break some ideas for a follow up story or issue. More to come, but for now, enjoy the pencils for page one.

Thanks for reading. For more illustration, comics, photography and the stories behind the work, follow me at @kommienezuspadt and @ghostfish at his blog.

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looking good, are you open to criticism?

Totally, @tetsuo! Let me have it!

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I think it will be cool to see it light up in that first frame, and then see the smoke come out as he exhales.

my thoughts exactly, also gives it more continuity as well as looking way more cool. Great worth though.

Great idea for the story, and great pencil! looking forward to see the inked version.

The idea reminds me of Jacques Tardi's True Story of The Unknown Soldier where you go through the dying hallucinations of a soldier who in his civilian life was a writer of cheap pulp fiction.

Page 1 is looking good! It's an interesting page for a comic starter. I like all the shot angles that you chose to draw these two here. His brain might be splattered, but at least he still can smoke :D.
Oh I noticed that his sash changed side from the first panel to the second, not sure if that's intentional?

Good job, looking forward to more :).

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Thank you guys, have shared stories about brave warriors, I really like the comics you make

Nice Comics Art. @kommienezuspadt

Looking good Lars! :D looking forward to see the upcoming pages :O

Deft pencilling. Compelling idea, definitely my cup of tea. Absolutely following updates and news of this comics.

I love the way you render smoke plumes; that's something that always gives me agita. It's that can look so stiff and wrong so quickly but you nailed it. Can't wait to see more from this project!

Really good job on this!

It's a very promising comic book with a pretty interesting story! I'll be wishing I could read it, excellent work

More and more I like to see your drawings, they seem incredible to me! I missed watching other of your works @kommienezuspadt! ... with your brief introduction and I'm excited that the comic is ready is an incredible story, I would like to see its development!
Here is also super late but I work on a drawing and the night will be very long, I hope it's ready soon!
I think I would need an air like that, it's a huge heat lately.

Like a friend of mine once said: the son of a bitch can draw!! (of course that is meant as a compliment)

Amazing story and I can imagine there were many such a sad tale during the great world wars.

This is the second blog I have read about it being hot and muggy already in MN which is amazing to me as here in MA we are in a long Spring with cool days. Though today it is meant to get up to 70, a bit warm for Spring, but it is the end of May. We have been lucky with a long Spring this year.

I cannot stand the heat. we just have window units as our house is so old and the cost of central cooling would be probably too great and so many other things need to be done around here. However, I use our window unit as a fan even in Winter, as I need ice cold to sleep.

Back to your drawing: just amazing. The curvilinear line of smoke and mirrored in the landscape just give it such movement. Well done.

Lookin’ sick dude. Looking forward to working out the nitty gritty and the details. Any thoughts on titles?

great idea, good luck with it

Good friendship at war, light up cigarette instead of hand grenade....:D

Oh this is so good. If you ever decide to forsake your blossoming career as a photographer, you would do well as a Big Tobacco sales rep :P