#ARTONIT # 1 ETAPA 1: Vodka Tonic

in artonit •  7 years ago  (edited)

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"Patti Smith y Robert Mapplethorpe" Fuente

Deja de temerle a la muerte
olvídate del ataúd
escoge las flores que te gusten: puede ser el último día
escribe como su fuera la palabra final

Trata de pensar en aquellas cosas
que quisiste decir y no te atreviste

Cántame una canción
bailemos sobre la cama
bebamos vodka
escuchemos rock and roll del viejo que es mejor
leamos un poema de Rimbaud
miremos fotos de Mapplethorpe

Pon las flores donde van
porque voy a quitarte tus panties
y arder en tus pezones delirar tu cuerpo
en medio de la noche
hasta que nunca más nos olvidemos
de hablarnos

Y por favor
cuando me vaya
no dudes en dejar
una botella de vodka
en la mesa.

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      ·  7 years ago 

    Release the Kraken! You got a 1.69% upvote from @seakraken courtesy of @absoluteurea!

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        ·  7 years ago 

      Muchas gracias por participar!!

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          ·  7 years ago 

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            ·  7 years ago 

          Hola @absoluteurea . Tu poema dice adiós sin decirlo. Te dejo mi voto.
          También estoy concursando. !Suerte!

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              ·  7 years ago 

            Gracias!

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                ·  7 years ago 

              Que increíble. La sensación que deja este poema es el de disfrutar la vida sin preocupaciones, sin sentir en nada más que simple satisfacción por el momento. Excelente manera de contar tal manera de pensar.

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                  ·  7 years ago 

                Gracias @greciav aunque tal manera de pensar viene por el hecho mismo de darlo todo y luchar, guerrear por aquello que uno cree. Gracias por tu comentario.

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