This sounds like a very personal story. Possibly something that you have actually lived. It could also be something that you have observed. Just the one detail of video games is pretty spot on in my opinion, because I have observed many friends who have husbands who play video games in the evenings. And the question is, why are they behaving like they are are 12 years old? I think you imply that playing video games evening after evening isn't appropriate for a grown man, and I agree.