Wow! Incredibly powerful. This Sky a very fierce. You are a great artist @kommienezuspadt. Your style is raw and totally heavy metal. Rock On!
Her hair is perfect and I like her power stance. The body is strong and able, and the clothes are divine and allow her to move and fight.
A couple of minor comments that will improve your chances of winning one of the prizes. Quality, intricate work, likes yours, totally deserves a prize.
- The Hu’urei look like humans. You may want to remove the pointy hear and add some hair in one of them.
- Sky at this stage of the novel is a teen; this is her first moment of violence, rage and defiance. Have a think about how you could tone down slightly the lips and eyes, and still make her look totally fierce.
- Lastly, I assume the body is not encased in armour as boob plates would kill her -> (http://www.tor.com/2013/05/06/boob-plate-armor-would-kill-you/). So I assume the golden metal will appear in the arms and shoulders and that the body is covered with leather. Love the outfit.
Terrific work. I'm in awe of your skills. Thank you, thank you, thank you. J
Thanks for the notes @jamielefay, and kind words! I can clean up the Hu'urei. Costume change isn't a biggie either. The lip looks fuller in this because she's suppose to be dragging it down with the lick [...that'll be coming after the inking]. Also, there's going to be a lot of blood around her mouth [...considering doing the stripes across the face. Do you think that'll be too much?].
I'll make changes during the inking process. Thanks again for the opportunity!
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Fabulous, thank you. Blood around the mouth and stripes are good, we just need to make her face a bit younger. I'm excited about this!!! Thank youuuuu. J.
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I'm not sure if you are portraying Sky with pointy ears or not, it's hard to tell. She also looks like a human. She does very powerful genes and physical strength and natural beauty... and ... and... ;)
Her leg -> " as another Hu’urei jumped in her direction and pierced her thigh with his sword. She screamed in agony" Thanks. J.
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Oh my goodness, I'm so excited about this submission. Good luck
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You are incredible Ms J. The boob plate article is very good. You should have warned the designers that Ahe'ey is a feminist novel. I think after the changes this should probably be one of the winner.
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The next episode will out me completely. ;)
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