Hi steemians:

A few days ago, when reviewing the old scripts I have saved, I found a project that had started but i never wanted to end. I decided to read it from the beginning to see how much my writing had changed and the truth is that the surprise that led me was very pleasant to realize that the story and the characters were more decent than I remembered, so that was how i think in redesign the characters and show them today.

Supplicium is a script I wrote in 2018 that tells the story of Alfred, a 14-year-old boy who finds a 17th-century medallion inside an old store. Alfred, ipnotized by the object, decides to buy it and take it home to keep it in his immense collection of ancient relics, when he discovers that said medallion was being possessed by the soul of two children.

These boys are called Dimas Bonum and Gestas Malum, two souls who were condemned by Death itself to be bound for eternity to the medallion, with the only mission of tormenting everyone who possesses the object. All this in order for the owner to decide to commit suicide, for all the pain, once and for all.

At first, Dimas and Gestas, for fear of The Death, wish to fulfill the mission entrusted to them, but for the strength of will and the character that Alfred possesses, these two souls begin to become fond of him.

He is a withdrawn and mysterious 14-year-old boy, he likes insects and collecting foreign objects, as well as being an excellent student and ping pong player. He lives in a small urbanization on the outskirts of the city, in a Gothic mansion. In the afternoons she usually goes out to talk and play with her neighbor, who is her only friend and secret love.

It is a young soul over 400 years old, cheerful and optimistic. He likes board games and cards, besides being an inveterate fan of astronomy and the stars. He does not remember anything about life before his death, but that does not bother him either, he says that in this way he enjoys his phantasmagoric present more. He is the best friend of Gestas Malum and Alfred, recently.

He is a young soul of over 400 years, sarcastic and mocking. He likes hide and seek treasures, besides being an inveterate fan of caves and expeditions. He doesn't remember anything about life before his death, and that bothers him a lot, he says he doesn't know who he is in his present because of this fateful detail. He is Dimas Bonum and Alfred's best friend (not yet confirmed).

She is a charismatic but mysterious girl of 14 years, she likes mystery novels and collecting silverware, besides being an excellent student and tennis champion. She lives in a small urbanization on the outskirts of the city, in a Renaissance mansion. In the afternoon he usually goes out to talk and play with his neighbor Alfred Burton, who is her best friend and secret love.

It is a mysterious being of more than two meters long, with a boneless body without skin and a huge black tunic that covers everything visible, excepting its caravelic face. Not much is known about this entity, but that does not interfere with the fear that must be had.

They met since childhood through their parents, and for have similar tastes and hobbies formed a special bond. Alfred loves Helena, but thinks that Helena doesn't feel the same about him, and Helene is in love with Alfred, but she won't say anything until she is completely sure that she is mutual.

I hope you liked these Supplicium designs, because I love them. I hope to continue publishing things about this project more often and know your opinion in the comments. A big hug!