Haiku Saturday, Round 10, Contest and Community Building, by @prydefoltz

in concurso •  6 years ago  (edited)


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SADNESS


Like those leaves of a sad tree,
my tears keep falling
for a lost and distant love...

TRISTEZA

Como hojas de ese árbol
caen lágrimas
por un amor lejano...

@oscarina

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Interesting 7/5/7 structure! I loved the unity with nature here... How often it feels that the nature has empathy for our ups and downs. Thank you for this piece!

This was really beautiful. Lovely:)

Only time heals sadness. Like the fallen leaves, they follow their course.

Very good composition that immerses us in the feeling of melancholy for a loss, for missing a presence. Good job, @oscarina.

Personal sadness and love connected to nature. Nice, @oscarina

(Coming back to upvote in two days) ☻

@oscarina you were flagged by a worthless gang of trolls, so, I gave you an upvote to counteract it! Enjoy!!