RE: STACH Short Story Contest #29: 199 words, 5 winners, 15SB prize pool!

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STACH Short Story Contest #29: 199 words, 5 winners, 15SB prize pool!

in contest •  7 years ago 

On bended knees
The thought of letting her go was inconceiveable and made him sick to his stomach.
some part of him had always known the day would come when his futuristic promises would not be enough to make her stay.
sure they argued a number of times before but it had never escalated to the extent to which it did now,in an attempt to make sure it didn't go beyond it's current state he went on to recount past events which they had both been through all of which had no effect on her.confused as he was,he watched as she packed her belongings.
it might have been due to the fact that he never knew her to make rash decisions or maybe it was the expression on her face that told him it would take a lot more than words this time.with no other option he struggled to keep her from leaving the house.
How could he blame her for wanting more in a relationship,but for him tying the knot would have to wait,so he pleaded even harder than usual and when that didn't work he went on both knees but sadly it wasn't enough.

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