Lets try something different - Collaborative Flash Fiction Stories. 5 SBD+ to win. Winner of last week inside! (Of Mice And D-Men)

in creative •  7 years ago 


@Lizzyb
The wind started to swell and the leaves from the trees whispered an ominous song, Pretty soon the lord of darkness would arrive, spreading his wrath among the...

@Mikepm74

Mice.

Yes the lord of darkness really hated mice. So he delivered his wrath on the pesky vermin wherever he walked. Mice coughed and hacked as their airways were sealed shut by an invisible force coming from the dark lord in waves of power.

He paused for a moment, reaching out to lean against a tree. that was when...

@lizzyb

He heard a branch snapping followed by heavy breathing. Something was hiding behind him in the thick dark bushes. An evil grin appeared on his face and he slowly creeped up to where the sound was coming from...

@dlina-v-metrah

Similar to silent howl. The sound gradually intensified, and suddenly something was stuck in the neck behind ...

@lizzyb

The dark lord. His bony hand reached to his neck and he squeezed the life out of the mouse he just caught, He looked at the lifeless little body and started laughing, That's what going to happen when you bother me, Is there someone else that will give it a try, His eyes....

@Mikepm74

Sought out the form hidden in the shadows. Finally stopping at a stand of shrubbery. "I know you are there" the Dark Lord intoned as his gaze fixed on the shrubs. "Why don't you come out so we can have a nice chat?" his stare could have burned through the bush to that which hid behind.

A heavy sigh could be heard as motion rustled the leaves of the shrubbery....


This was the winning thread from the previous game, congrats to @Mikepm74, @Dlina-v-metrah and @Lizzyb. I will be sending the prize post haste lest we upset the dark one(s?). 5 SBD will be split among you. Thanks so much for taking part! <3

You may reply to this post with a sentence or two telling a story that is leading on from the previous comment.

The next step in the story should be a to reply to that comment. The winning thread will be one chosen by me and my secret panel of judges.

Remember there could be multiple stories going on at any time, so refresh often and take a look! <3

Lets start those threads people!

The winner will be announced in 1 week when this post matures and 5 SBD will be used as the prize to award to all participants of the winning chain so feel free to spread the word.

I will publish the winner(s) each week here.

One thing I'd like to see if we can make participating in the comments section to be valued as much as the post itself, this would be interesting to me so lets see if we can pull it off!! Make participation it's own reward! Upvote one anothers comments!

Thanks for participating in this week long experiment!

Got quite a few participants this week and pretty happy with the effort! Lets see if we can write an even better story this time! Looking forward to your feedback as well.

Much love,
@sammosk, <3.


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Thank's for sharing

nice....

Jewel sat, slumped against the crusted dumpster in the dank alleyway. She could still hear the howling screams bellowing faintly in the distance. Were they coming or going? It was impossible to tell, it seemed to fill every inch of the air with omniscient presence.
Then she smelled it, the iron. The metallic reek that surrounded and announced it. She heard that rattling breath and looked up...

And felt her heart begin to beat more slowly, and her eyelids close, as if she had swallowed a sleeping pill.

She was fighting to keep her eyes open, "I can't fall asleep, not just now" The last thing she saw when she looked up was ..

the centuries old heap. A rust bucket of death and destruction. The EM frequency it was emmitting was causing a dull throbbing in her now sleep infested brain. The dreams were starting to tear at her emotions and.....

she felt somewhat sure she would go insane. suddenly the noise stopped.
the silence was deafening.

slowly she sat u, taking in her surroundings.
'Where am i?' she asked aloud, though there was no-one nearby that could hear her.

  ·  7 years ago (edited)

It was dark, but she could tell that she wasn't in the city anymore. Her hearing began to return and there was the sound of frogs and cicadas and animals calling to one another. But she didn't understand the sounds. She had never heard these sounds. Where? AND HOW?!?

She should have been in a panic, but the soft serenity of this lush environment had her in a warm, peaceful state.

'Snap!' A stick broke some distance away....

Her heart skipped a beat while she was trying not to move. Something was closing in on her. The footsteps became louder and louder, she closed her eyes, held her breath and waited for....

  ·  7 years ago (edited)

Thank you very much @sammosk for the prize
resteemed 😊

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