CROWDWRITE: Peacock Stares

in crowdwrite •  7 years ago 

Ten days ago, I expressed an idea stuck in my head thusly:

P.S. (but no more)
scribed and scribbled, mars the end
of your letter home

Then I asked people to join in with their own variations on this theme. Below are some of the great haikus in response:

@dbooster
my letter home
an unfilled P.S.
our secret code

@firststeps
Like the bitter cold
Of an early winter frost
That destroys all hope

@yahialababidi
If you do not ask
that I return Home, again
I will write you more.

@themadrunnah
We were once so bright
Passion to burn the skies, yet
Our flame gutters out

@jayna
You’ve been gone so long
I have forgotten your face
But never your touch

@moneyinfant
Do you remember
Our walks on the summer beach
Now my beach is ice

This was such fun that I decided to try it again. So here's a haiku inspired by a peacock at the zoo:

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Tail of a peacock
unfurls, fans flat in a flare;
a hundred eyes stare.

For this one, please submit your own haiku on a zoo animal that you find poem-worthy! Leave it in the comments below or make a post and link it. Let's put together a series of haiku verses that will tell the entire story of our day at the zoo. And if you'd like to jump in, come visit us in the #crowdwrite channel at the Isle of Write!

[ peacock image courtesy pixabay.com ]


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Great content. Upvoted by @eastcoaststeem ran by Steemian @chelsea88. My goal is to support east coast Steemians through manual curation and facilitation of steemit positive initiatives.

Oh, it’s so fun to see the collection of poems from the first round! I will think up something for the new one.

Good bravo @geke

Great idea, and great responses from everyone on that last one. I'm going to bed now (or soon) but I will think on one tomorrow. Please ping me on discord if I forget.

Great collection of haiku. Much enjoyed. Look me up if you are looking for more. A haiku nut coming at you:):):)

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