One story, two sections, same time frame

in digi3d •  8 years ago  (edited)

So I'm running a story inbetween thesis papers but I somehow stated writing two different sections of the same story at the same time!?!?!

Okay okay, i stated writing the beginning. On a different day i went to go write more but i couldn't access my cloud to add on from where i was but i wrote anyway. I came up with an awesome section that made me re-think my timeline and order of this story! So here's both excerts in link.
https://steemit.com/digi3d/@digi3d/an-excert-of-a-beginning
https://steemit.com/trevonjb/@digi3d/another-excert-and-story
So, whatcha think? Be easy please...

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