I have no idea what just happened or what I just watched or where I am, but I liked it. I would imagine this is the kind of script you could only write whilst suffering from the effects of a really bad fever, haha.

I lost it when Goldie walks in, and you say, "Are you hungover, did you do a poo poo?" the offputting up close face shots were also a nice touch. This offbeat style of humour is really right up my alley (or should I say nappy?).

Have you ever seen the Eric Andre show? It's Eric Andre essentially messing with his guests physically and mentally, but it's hilarious. If not, you should go onto YouTube and binge some of his beds, very offbeat humour but I think you would like it.

Aside: it is really great to see you on Steemit @benleemusic at first I wasn't sure if it wasn't really you at first, but after checking out this short, it's clear you're the real Ben Lee, instant follow. I've been a huge fan of your music for years and it's also great to have another Aussie on here as well.