RE: DnW Poetry Contest #3: THE FALLING LEAF

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DnW Poetry Contest #3: THE FALLING LEAF

in dnwpoetrycontest •  7 years ago 

Wow it a lovely poem, keep it up

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      ·  7 years ago 

    @abduljelil Thanks! Is it really lovely? Hahaha. Anyways, did you also participate in this contest? I would like to read your works

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        ·  7 years ago 

      You've got a good start but it will be much better if both lines will compliment with each other, though it may not all. And poems are feelings you put down and written. Try to synchronized each end words with same tone as much possible it will add more flavor in ur poems. Overall, good job :)

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          ·  7 years ago 

        Noted. What do you mean by:

        ...it will be much better if both lines will compliment with each other...

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        Try to synchronized each end words with same tone...

        I will definitely take your suggestion when I will write my next poem. Salamat @dianargenti

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          ·  7 years ago 

        You're so nice for commenting on this post. For that, I gave you a vote!

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          ·  7 years ago 

        Ayy tanawa ra lines diay na ako na suwat! Stanza mn gud unta hehehe Doo lagi ko maayo bga kritiko! I mean dli kaau sila maglagyo sa una nga stanza how can I put it "let's say they both have same beauty before nimo sila bulagon." Ayyy unsaon lisod hahaha

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