Living dawn, grey with promise

in dreamscape •  7 years ago  (edited)

Living dawn, grey with promise

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Alive in the vacillation
Of the flesh uncertain
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Straining towards causation:
Explanatory shadows which
Whir and blink
Out of existence.
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The body is a crumbling mountain,
The spirit, a writhing sea.

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The landscape of infinity hides itself
In dense dreams, shrouded by the
Coarse desires that create new worlds.
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The mind flutters metallic,
Mercurial avian, intermediary.

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Alive, in the simplicity
Of indecision:
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Grey cloud that camps
On the cold horizon
Of destiny.


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Written by
@d-pend
12/17/17

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Metallic destiny - the indecision of a vegan promise or a trick of bloody meat. The wind breaks peaceful promises in the exposition of meditative energy - this is you in the poetry of depth and magical vibration. Thank you @d-pend
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The karma can be very loud or very peaceful in the millet of the life. In the time of coarse desires, dense dreams, indecision is rushing towards the landscape of infinity...If we decide that in this lifetime we want to improve and go beyond the modes of tamas, rajas and sattwa then a perfect whir and blink shows up.

Very kindly shared by @d-pend. Thanks

Beautiful commentary @tatjanastan. Indeed we are beyond all of the three states of waking, dreaming, and deep sleep. Moreover we are beyond the three gunas. Our potential is only limited by our willingness to be available to the expansion that awaits us, as our indescribable cosmic destiny.

I liked this piece. I've been talking about crypto a lot today, so I related a lot of the images and phrases to that situation and how it is changing a lot of the world and how costly indecision is (mostly related to myself). Thanks for sharing, as always.

Cool. I always like to hear when people can relate a piece back to their personal experience of life. Helps me stay motivated and feel that my work makes some type of impact. Thank you @moeknows. Have a great day my friend!

Alive, in the simplicity
Of indecision - oh, great expression

the poem must touch smth deep in soul, not only mind, and you really can do it any time somehow)

I appreciate your kind words and for the feedback on which expression you found poignant @taliakerch. Thank-you, as always!

You have quite the interesting perspective of the world around us.. This is amazing, as with all the other things I have read from you!

Thanks much my friend @redsfallin! Glad you resonate with it in some way!

the simplicity of indecision... ❤

<3 :-D <3

How did you go about accruing such a vocabulary ? incredible work !

"Alive in the simplicity of indecision"

Love it.

Depressing, but really good!

perfect

I love the effect of photography and writing is great

Dope poem here
Keep it up

Nice pics and nice poetry my friend

loving a future with more of this, upvoted

What a Masterpiece!! Great

Nicely done.
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..poetic

Nice poem

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perfect poem greeting