Saying the things you shouldn't say
Hanging out with the wrong people
Try everything that you see on TV
Give in to peer pressure
Give in to fear pressure
Doing the things you shouldn't do
Saying the things you shouldn't say
Hanging out with the wrong people
Let your heart go where it could never go
We can live together
We can live together
We can live as one
Doing the things you shouldn't do
Saying the things you shouldn't say
Hanging out with the wrong people
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This is a great tune! Very strong bridge that I enjoyed. Everyone loves a good piano solo too:)
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@samvan I consider the bridge the other "A" section in this tune. It's A-A-A-A-A ;)
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I get it!
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the truth behind your song amazing @cosmicvibration. Wrong peoples is always making the habits. so stay far away..
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Sounds great. Thanks for sharing.
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[**DISCLAIMER : Thie is only MY PERSONAL opinion] Another good, shareable one : https://twitter.com/TranscriptJunky/status/1007510314110222337, and (in my opinion) EVOLVING bit by bit - more polished instrumentation, MUCH improving vocals and backup vocals. etc. My main SNIPPET of feedback based on this new song relates to what I was detailing about the rhythm of the lyrics. This aspects is certainly mproving, but let me show you an EXAMPLE by doing a fun experimental rewrite/polishing of the lyrcis above. Keep in mind that my main focus is polishing the RHYTHM of the lyricsto be MOST in line with the FUNKY/JAZZY/POPPY style of your (current) sound. I think that by looking at my revised lyrics you will see the logic. Even better would be if you could do an "A/B test" by remaking this sound with (my or your own) slightly revised lyrics, just to see how tweaking the lyrics can have a SIGNIFICANT effect on the overall sound and song. Again, this is PURELY my CONSTRUCTIVE opinion, BUT is based on some "sound" theory (pun intended ;->)...
Doing the things you shouldn't do
Saying the things you shouldn't say
Hangin' [-] with the wrong people
Try[ing] everything that you see on TV
Giv[ing] in to peer pressure
Giv[ing] in to fear pressure
Doing the things you shouldn't do
Saying the things you shouldn't say
Hangin' [-] with the wrong people
Let your heart go where it could never go
We [should] live together
We can live together
We can live as one
Doing the things you shouldn't do
Saying the things you shouldn't say
Hangin' [-] with the wrong people
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