Three poems for day five [Day 5]

in dsound •  7 years ago  (edited)

Three poems for day five

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"To the unutterable"
"Life, a cyclical anchor" &
"Lovestone"
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original poetry


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Check out my recitation of
These three poems
On @dsound:

► Listen on DSound

► Listen from source (IPFS)


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To the unutterable

My dark choice – this is
A dedication made repeatedly,
Serenity – this is the brunt
Of my sacred devotion.

My dark love – this is
A thunderous voyage, a
Vivid hallucination of heaven,
My lofty devotion.

Darkness that chooses me,
A blinding blackness in the soul
Of the universe that births
Me into a cursed devotion.

Darkness which ever loves me,
Phoenix of my conveyance
Tension – the metamorphosis
Of my devotion sanctified.

My dark devotion – to the ineffable.
It is my wrangled unfoldment,
It is my judicious ecstasy.
Serenity, my black love, my wholeness,
It is my heartflown symphony.


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Life, a cyclical anchor

Over & over again
I pay the price of
The glory of my fate,
Its ignominy & its gall,
Its dominating wingspan
Overshadowing the sun.

Over & over again
I reap the soft gestures
Between granular rows of eyes,
The misted fields pregnant
With love unmanifested.

Over & over again
I write songs & forget them,
Pen lines and erase myself
To the misery that stalks me
Through dimensions & people.

Over & over again
I bargain with physics &
Preach to receptive boulders,
Bestow presents upon thin beauties
& hurl myself off life's cliffs

To fall over
& over again
Into the waiting
Arms of love.


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Lovestone

I flow my soul into alabaster;
I flail with the weight of discovery.
Discovery that makes me a sculptor,
A sculptor of rivers in ink.

I ink into wretched peripheries
& restore their pellucid grace.
They are my families in ivory spells;
They are my splashes of chaotic oils.

I flow my mind into legacies
That live so long beyond my grasp,
They burst into a querulous flight.
They shudder in rhythms quixotic.

Quixotic my breast of beliefs
And rapid the waves that batter them 'bout,
Emphatic to shake my resolve:
Resolution long rooted in love that absolves.

I flow my heart into form;
I lovingly craft its pulse from this stone
Alabaster & limestone & quartz—
Stone poem that adventure through light me exhorts.


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Written & spoken
By @d-pend
3/11/18
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Images by

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1 — "Geometric abstract: Islands" by IsabelleMaria
2 — "After the rain" by S-t-r-a-n-g-e
3 — "Out of blur wheat" by S-t-r-a-n-g-e


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Notes


Throughout the course of this 100 days, I plan to employ many different techniques in writing poetry that I normally do not use much with the intention of broadening my writerly palette. I think the increased interaction with radically different styles of writing will help many of us begin to experiment and venture into methods of expression with which we are less comfortable. At times, we poets can tend to rest on our laurels, content with our slice of paradise. Onwards, and upwards, I say!

While writing these three poems during Day 5 of the challenge, I held the intention to experiment with a few different manners of employing repetition, which will be one topic of class for tomorrow (from 6 - 8 pm GMT in the Steemit School Live voice channel of the Steemit School Discord) I also focused on conveying strong emotion, passion, conviction—in contrast to many of my more detached, cerebral offerings. I hope you'll enjoy them, and perhaps listen to my recitation, if @dsound will work for you. The audio, I think, helps convey the feelings I am attempting to communicate.

I hope you'll pardon my lack of extensive reading notes here! I am still rather behind in getting everything for the challenge sorted. Please be patient, as I assure you all the winners of previous days will receive their rewards, and I will get back to the pattern of regular updates. By week two and three we will be running like a well-oiled machine! Many thanks to all participants and curators. Keep up the great work & strengthen your resolve daily with the certainty that we will emerge from these 100 days stronger as a poetic community as well as individually! Much love.

Wholeness,
@d-pend


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I've listened to this twice and I loved hearing the emotion and emphasis as you read your poems; especially the last one! I think it's great to hear the author read their own poems and it's a great idea for you to encourage all those in the 100 day poetry contest to do that!

The passion and directness of these prayer-poems speaks to me, @d-pend, especially the first two. I’m reminded of a modern poet I much admire, Kevin Hart, who speaks often of his ‘dark devotion to the ineffable’. That first poem, especially, is one worth revisiting more than once.

Also, these lines, from poem two linger with me:
“Over & over again
I write songs & forget them,
Pen lines and erase myself”

I know the feeling...

Peace, Yahia

Thanks bro for taking your time and showing support and love to all poets that joined this beautiful challenge. It seems 100 days is too much but I hope many users will reach this goal...
I hope one day, if I get better at this, to engage in conversation about your and others poems, but for now I'm just reading and soaking the styles, words and feelings... :)

I wonder how you could write 3 poems in a day with such great result... It's really impressive.
I'm struggling to write everyday😭. I guess with much practice and dedication i can get to that level one day

  ·  7 years ago (edited)

Ahh thanks for the kind comment... you can do it! Don't worry about it being perfect. Practice is the most important thing, and reading.

Ok! Thank you for today's kind words. Such inspiration and words of encouragement.
Let me go and write my day 5 poetry.
Hopefully, i'll be available to participate in today's steemit school lecture

sorry for my impression, i want to ask you the same?
when the announcement of the 2nd day winner of the 100 days poet contest.
we are all very enthusiastic waiting for who the winner is.
thank you

Sorry for the delay @diamanka. The winners for day 2 & 3 will be announced tomorrow. Thanks for your patience

I love how the abstractness of our being is being varied with physical actions.

three days and five poems and here i can't ever write a single stanza

Love the poem, honestly I read it 3 times this is worth reading and I wish i can write same as this. God bless.

hi @d-pend! How are you today? I have not heard your poems for a long time. Your poem is still very cool. The way you read the poem still touches my soul and I always like the way you read poetry. But I am still confused with (day 5). Are you following a poetry contest?
Thank you and wish you a wonderful day... :)

Hi @reynakarina, thank you! Glad you liked it. Yes, I have embarked on this poetic journey; it is 100 days of poetry where we write one English poetry daily. I started this contest a week ago :-D

Wow, this is really cool @d-pend, but it's in a very long time, maybe I can not think of writing poetry for 100 days. But I am sure you must have an idea to write a poem, because I see you can always produce beautiful poems. Hopefully you will win in the contest.

'Life, a cyclical anchor' is a Extra ordinary poem . Your fascinating word and its reality really impressed me . Especially I have like this poem and it has touched my heart.

Very nice poetry, thanks for sharing @d-pend

Interesting poems to read today had a nice time reading it thanks for sharing them : )

To be a reflection in that still pool. . .

Deepest levels of Woo here, lush as silk velvet against bare skin.

::Bows Deeply::

Nice one fam, you think wide. Keep it up
Resteemed

Very interesting post my brother, you are very talented and will be a successful person in all areas, and I really like you ..@d-pend

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I will be very glad & grateful to you.

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Breathe and Be: A Book of Mindfulness Poems aims to introduce kids aged 4–8 to mindfulness by connecting them to the natural world through poems and accompanying images.

The poems use a five-line form of Japanese poetry called tanka, an early version of haiku.

Love your post @d-pend

Nicely coined with words chosen carefully to convey a deep meaning

Songs of Solomon 1:5

Dark am I, yet lovely, daughters of Jerusalem, dark like the tents of Kedar, like the tent curtains of Solomon.

Regardless of the style your poems trigger a thought process to inquire to the state of my soul and the love I hold to be true.

I particularly enjoyed the first one because it speaks to the calmness with us. On my page, I write a lot about these facets and relate them to my failed dreams and life as a whole. I find solitude and the peace that comes with serenity too "soft" for my torrid mind.
The second one ended beautifully, I actually had to read it twice to grasp what you were writing about. My internet in Nigeria is too slow to stream the sounds of your recitals but these were three great writes.

Please how may I join this crusade? I'm already a member of the discord channel?

Wow what an amazing lines thee are <3 ineed they own some great deoth in it ;)

I flow my heart into form;
I lovingly craft its pulse from this stone
Alabaster & limestone & quartz—
Stone poem that adventure through light me exhorts.

Amazing lines of the second poem @d-pend. much appreciated.

Awesome

Thank you @d-pend I like your method used to write you are exemplar.

I love so much when somene writing the topic about love and life.
I appreciate for your many different techniques of writing poetry.
Keep up writing the awesome poetry!
Im with you.

that Lovestone wow it was brilliant one of my favorite from your post :)

  ·  7 years ago Reveal Comment

Gives 1% upvote to post, comments one sentence, gives 100% upvote to own comment, classic!

::cackle:: Oh man.... totally classic.

Your cackle totally made me guffaw.