Nice video.
I would end the presentation with the world: rewarding...so you have "Simple" then "Meaningful" then add "Rewarding".
I would also bring the reward side of things a bit more to the front of the video. First couple of sentences shall bring the unique value proposition of ESTEEM8/Steemit in front. Also, I would not mention to many obvious things, all the different post catgeories you mention takes most part of the preso, but is not adding anything. People will know what Social Media is. See also the comments by @cryptoctopus, he uses different words for the same thing I try to explain.
BTW, are you planning crowdfunding by asking donations, or will you in the end have a premium model using your frontend to Steemit, ie a dollar value to be paid before able to use your software?
We would like to not insist on the reward side of steem however, that schould maybe be a bit cleared.
Crowdfunding without counterparty,
The app will be free with the possibility of splitting post reward to make an automatic donation in percentage.
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But what will you give as incentive at Kickstarter? They usually buy a product and prepay it. Since your product does not cost money, you cannot ask for money at Kickstarter for your product. You will use another model?
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They usually recieve a counterparty, the counterparty is a free app financed by people .
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I personally have no experience with such campaigns other than money for a commercial product.
Looking forward on your success of the campaign.
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