So what did you think? - chapter 1

in feedback •  6 years ago 

Hellooo, tis me again, yes I know I'm a bother. But, guess what? I posted another chapter! And it is beautiful if I do say so myself. ;)

But that's not important (even though it kinda is.) I want to know what YOU think. Yes you. I want you to tell me what you think.

Whether or not it is to inflate my ego or destroy it is up to you ( but please don't be too harsh ) I am sensitive.

In my last post I updated my book, Chapter one - The Enemy.

And it is up to you to tell me whether I need more work or... alot more work (praises are encouraged ;) )

So please take a few seconds to comment on my my story and you can be off on your merry day.

To those who commented on my previous work, I thank you for your support. * bows *

Have a good day! And please comment!

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