So what did you think? -startings of a book

in feedback •  7 years ago 

Soo... hi it's me again I just posted my prologue to my fantastic book and forgot to put in an author's note. how silly of me

I know it short compared to the other prologues you might see, but I really wanted you feel the emotions before it became too drawn out. I know I'm evil

I just wanted too know what your thoughts are so that I can improve.

I know the world thinks that teenagers don't listen to squat, but I swear I'm not like that! ... most of the time...

Anyway that's all for now. I won't bug you any longer.

Just tell me what you think! Thank you

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