RE: Francis & The Pitfalls of Chilvary

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Francis & The Pitfalls of Chilvary

in fiction •  7 years ago 

What do you think of it story-wise?

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      ·  7 years ago 

    I don't know if you asked me but that Francis character seems a bit too OP. I prefer when characters win through their wits. I can't say anymore with just this bit.

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      He remains OP and keeps talking down on everyone he meets. It's like a nagging teacher who doesn't let you have fun. Very unlikable lead.

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        ·  7 years ago 

      He's not meant to be likable. And since when does relatability matter to you?

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          ·  7 years ago (edited)

        realism>self insert "badass"....wait a second....turkish? wait is bondless the writer?

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            ·  7 years ago 

          um...uh...

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