I wasn't sure where this was going at first. I was afraid a zombie like thing was about to jump out and go all "Supernatural" on me... but I really like where you're going with this. The "Pichael Meterson" was awesome, too!
You should check out the #freewrite challenges. It only takes like five minutes a day and is a great community. This is the prompt for today, or you can find them on @mariannewest page!
I'll try to remember to share more writing challenges as I come across them. There are some awesomely fun ones and they don't take much time.
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Constrained Writing Contest is great, too!
This is a GENIUS challenge, where you just add one part to a story chain and win whaleshares if yours is chosen Steemit Story Chain
Good luck!