You have a minor misspelling in the following sentence:

Beneath the surface of the Dinosaur King’s civilization again however laid the Serpent People ever the ambitious and stealthy species they continued their policies of taking slaves from the public eye unbeknownst to many of the sentients in the Dinosaur-Yithian Civilization and society and continued their plans of conversion and recruitment of new Serpent People almost as if they’re previous publically known Empire’s fall never occurred.

It should be publicly instead of publically.