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Nice short story.

Appreciate it!

Simone wants to be partnered with a "good slave to society" eurgh good luck simone

"Freedoms just another word for nothing left to lose".. The characters seem to have nothing but each other.. I think it looks as though Simone is manipulating Ritchie so he will succeed - but I suppose she could also be setting him up to fail.. Perhaps that dynamic will be clearer in future stories. Relationships are rarely easy to figure out - even if the characters are of your own creation! I don't know these two.. yet..

I see a picture of a female unhappy with her chosen life partner, who is trying to change him. This is the problem with society, nobody is happy with what they have (me included), if Simone wont accept him for who he is, then maybe she was right to see another bloke, maybe that 1 was more willing to bend to please her, either way Ritchie will be better off without Simone. just my point of view mate :)

Appreciate the interpretation!