Join me as I throw crippled hands and lost feet into the forlorn air.
Join me as I sing a song of torture with my lips
Cracked and pierced by a burning love, pitiably sour.
Now that just a single eye leaks
Now that none of my eyes leak
Only my damaged heart, carressing pain and sadness gently.
Sing with me in a chorus “We are victims”
An unknown person has held our hands and feet with bounds.
We wriggle in pain.
This pain has consumed us all over
We ache all over
We lost touch with each other.
What has made a detestable mess of our loving hearts.
I see in your eyes how much sadness I have caused you
Each sob sends a million painful shiver down my spine
Each cold stare reminds me of my weakness and faults.
Truly, you think I am the Demon
Truly, I think you are the wicked wizard
But baby, before it is too late..
Take just one step closer
Closer to my heart….
You would see that we are both innocent.
That we are victims trapped in a burning lake.
Even every wrong action demonstrates how much we love each other,
How much we are willing to hold on.
We have reached several bitter ends and have started over again.
The problem is not love.
It is not you and it is not me.
It is a strange and annoying force that keeps screaming. . .
“Too complicated”
I never want to realize that it was never meant to be.
This is our blues and I want to be trapped in it with you forever.
Yet my pierced heart clamours for freedom and happiness.
We are chained lovers…..
As much as it hurts and torments.
There is a feeling of safety that I am trapped in this choking love chain with you.
Look closer baby, I have seen it.
Our sweetsour love cries not because of me, not because of you.
But because of a dark something that lurks around our screaming hearts.
Still... Lots of love.
This work is 100% fiction
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I always love your fiction stories, this one is a poem, love it
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This is deep, a description from the heart.
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Chucky is at it again must you always be bloody #winks 😋
Wonderful work
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Beautiful work,Ma. It communicates love to me,yes love in the midst of pain!
Excellent poetry
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I like it, you made use of lots of figures of speech.... Nice work
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This work is 100% ok :)
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Wonderful piece, it just shows that love always rises above imperfections and mistakes whether past or present, thanks for sharing.
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Such a delight to read your work.....
Nice one
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'We have reached several bitter ends and have started over again.' This line felt like a stab, a true one that many have experienced. Great words
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Melody and sweet.
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More like a song's lyrics
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Holla..@mimy. I'm trilled by your great works. You know after going through your blog i was driven to trace back my step from where i missed it. This steps i meant are beyond steemit. To cut it all short you are a very inspiring young lady. I wished i could ask you some few questions on how you discovered it all. Thanks @mimy
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Beautiful and deep expression in this write. I enjoyed. Thank you very much for posting it:)
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Love is a beautiful thing...
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Really deep and beautiful... it felt almost gothic
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A deep dark lurking Love
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#reminiscence of my love life.
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Promoting my post via your blog thanks. https://steemit.com/steem/@syl/mr-jailer
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This is really beautiful...deep and nice piece.
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Your Pen bleeds ,living the blood as trace to correction. Good work
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Wow wonderful poem @mimy I feel every words in every phrase :)
i love it ..
keep posting!
Love,
@micch
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This is a blend of friction and poetry.
May your pen always speak. Kudos.
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