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in fiction •  7 years ago  (edited)

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This is really good. You've hooked me.

Thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed it :D

Agh! I love how angry they all are. It's amusing and very gripping too.
I'm so glad I caught one of your serials at the beginning. Yayayayay!!!

I thought there may have been a tad too much profanity at first. xD

Maybe? I dunno. Still enjoyed it nonetheless!

Awesome beginning. I love the serpent tattoos. And the fact that there is a forgotten past, and a destiny. What does it all mean? I look forward to more, @xanderslee!

Hopefully I can turn those cliches on their heads and shake them viciously for change. :D I'm glad you liked it!

  ·  7 years ago (edited)

Definitely--I loved it! By the way, did you see my message on Discord?

I like the story thus far. You have me hooked. I am following.

Thank you so much :)

Good dialogue, I wish I was this good with dialogue!

Thanks! :)

I generally suck with dialogue. It's not easy.