Addie woke at daybreak, crossing knee-high blonde grasses to fill buckets from the river.
Fresh morning winds carried the scent of smoke and fish from the camp. Ma had started breakfast.
The yellow sky turned blue as the sun traveled the path that would guide their own trails below.
Westward.
Written for the #fiftywords story challenge - 19th Century Historical Fiction - created by @miniature-tiger!
Ah, another lovely word-picture from you, Ellie! I'm sorry to have missed so much these past couple of weeks, but happy to have caught this one!
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Thank you, I'm happy you liked it!
I hope your past couple of weeks were wonderful!
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Love and respect to you and your work!
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Thank you, talented man!
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i'm always a big fan of writing that appeals to the senses to create a snapshot that envelopes a reader, something done so well in this piece, @ellievallie.
the sight of the rising sun, the feeling of wheat grass brushing against the legs, the smells of camp and the awareness of the trials and tribulations the journey ahead will bring.
to capture so much in so little, exceptionally done, Elisabeth.
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Thank you so much, I'm honestly blushing right now!
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This gives us shine of a pleasant life. In the mid of reading it feels like I was doing the same things. Really interactive way to write post. thanks friend
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Long or short, your craft is incredibly amazing :)
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Thank you!
I need to work on a couple of longer pieces in progress before I get spoiled on these precision points.
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With much creativity is fiction writing
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Musical work you have here. Lovely.
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You made me want to read the rest of the story!
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beautiful!
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good job,keep it up...👌👌
dear @ellievallie
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fantastic photograph. stunning colors.... ready to clock watch so much
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