Did not check on grammar etc. however the emotion of sorrow and love you convey in the piece feels mostly real - Hope to be able to pull out some time for a full read some day and and further comments. Cheers - Have a good one!
RE: From "Ragnarok Conspiracy"; Part One, Chapter 4 (draft)
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From "Ragnarok Conspiracy"; Part One, Chapter 4 (draft)