5-minute Freewrite: Prompt- Appetite

in freewrite •  7 years ago  (edited)

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The sun has now set
Nobody in sight
That sudden tingling feeling
Came knocking in the night

It started with a thought
Then turned into desire
Scrolling through the feed
My tongue, it was on fire

Head became so light
Could almost see the twilight
The smell was almost too real
Mmm, that - that looks like a steal

Then came the realisation
Of this lingering sensation
That the reason for this temptation
Is the prompt "appetite"


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Excellent post!

Thanks! :)

I love this! Appetite sure does come "knocking in the night" :) You really captured the essence of it here too...nice job!

Hiiii @lynncoyle1, thanks! Glad you enjoyed this short piece :) xx

You are most welcome!

OH! For real! this is exactly how it happens with those prompts!! They just wiggle around in the brain begging for attention!

Well played!

Noticed your link in https://steemit.com/created/steemitmamas

Hahaha, totally agree on that! Some days when I get a new prompt in the morning it stays in my head and all sorts of imagination would go around tempting to be used. I have 2 babies so I usually do my writing at night. Thanks for dropping by, @marrillaanne! Glad you enjoyed the piece 😊 xx

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Really nice rhythmic poem.. Great work!

Thanks, @corina :)

I feel like eating that thing in the photo after i read your poem. lol. Seriously. no kidding.

Lol! Looks tempting, I know! That was why I chose this image, 'cause it had the same effect on me too! Haha 😂