The ease of the ooze
It seeps
A spring leaking gently from the mountainside
A watershed hidden
Just this dampening glisten
Can it pool?
Pool the ooze, gather its waters
Pipe it, dam its rocky basin.
Primordial slime renders deserts green
Just an ooze,
Becomes an oasis
A pocket cradling life
Biogenesis
So gentle, gentler than drops
Mucilaginous, cohesive
Mossy
Thanks as always to the delightful host of this post, @mariannewest for her awesome efforts running #freewrite!
https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/day-28-5-minute-freewrite-prompt-ooze
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Beautiful poem. I love how "just an ooze becomes an oasis. a pocket cradling life." : ) Tip!
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Thank you for your comment and tip, appreciations!
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My pleasure! : )
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You always amaze me!! Soooo beautiful! https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/day-29-5-minute-freewrite-prompt-great-grandpa-s-nose
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Aw you are so sweet! Thank you, also thanks for mentioning me for your daily steemian to visit. Big love
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Nice interpretation! I didn't really know what to write about with ooze. But you nailed it! Great post!
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It just kind of oozed out of me ;)
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What a imaginative and "primordial" poem, it makes me think about this planet billons of years ago, when all we call life started.
I follow you, fellow freewriter
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Thank you! I will upvote you when I am reloaded lol I appreciate you solidifying the community! Steem OM!
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Wow nice interpretation! I was also inspired to do a freewrite when I came upon @mariannwest account. I tried to do a single prompt under "crazy" and I hope you'll take time to read! I hope you'll leave a note so I could see how my writing went. See you around! 🤗
https://steemit.com/philippines/@brewingstories/stripped-a-5-minute-freewrite
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