Prompt: Sunset - 5 Minute Freewrite Challenge!

in freewrite •  7 years ago 

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[Source] https://pixabay.com/en/people-man-cry-sad-tree-sunset-2562694/

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I still remember that golden sunset.
And that place we were when we first met.
I still see you from time to time,
but in the arms of someone else, not mine.

I still remember those sparkling eyes,
The tears I would wipe, whenever you'd cry.
Your charming smile, and jet black hair.
Once you were mine, now you don't care.

At night I sometimes look up at the sky,
And wonder why all of this was a lie.
I sit all alone, don't care if I cry,
While over and over asking that one question, Why?

I sometimes think that if it was meant to be,
You wouldn't have done those things to me.
But since It's hopeless, I really don't care.
If he makes you happy, then I think that's fair.

Now I sat alone in that place when we first met,
watching the fading golden sunset.
Watching a couple cuddle the way they do,
my heart aches a little, when the girl in that couple, was you.

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Author's Notes

Hey guys! So here is my entry for the prompt: Sunset. When I saw the prompt. I suddenly thought of writing something cute, but, I wrote something a bit painful. So hope y'all like t and feel free to send me your suggestions and concerns..XD

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Haaaa! I knew there will be romantic stories! :P

So much emotion. Hopefully today's prompt will bring more levity...

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  ·  7 years ago (edited)

Oh my God, my heart </3 I wrote a short story with the same story as your poem. I think they are somewhat related XD I haven't posted it yet tho. Followed you bro

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