RE: 'Gymnastics' - a Poem - Freewrite #3

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'Gymnastics' - a Poem - Freewrite #3

in freewrite •  7 years ago 

I love this! Especially how one line leads to another through form and words. It really brings out the thought process and how we jump from one thought to another. I sometimes start with one thing and start thinking about something else, and when I retrace how I got there, I'm usually amazed at how the smallest of things trigger different thoughts!

I especially like these lines:

when that was
when was that...
when

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Thank you! I'm so glad that came across for you :) The paths our thoughts take... always an eternal mystery for me, and one deserving of exploration.