5 Minutes Freewrite - day 99!

in freewrite β€’Β  7 years agoΒ  (edited)

Ok this is as far away from my usual things to do but @ameliabartlett challenged me into doing a freewrite for @mariannewest and I'm already regretting it πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚lol
But here goes!

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Sunset slowly fades away,
hides behind the curtain.
Afraid of Mr moon and his shining face 😲

The Moon starts rising,
and scares away the day.
Chases the sun into the black hole.

Shows his shining face,
and start reflecting the water.
Beautiful sight but darkness hits.

A big black creature flies into the night.
Showing his shadow as he swings in the night.

A Mr batman in search of his Robin,
swings like a chandelier between the light and the dark.

As the moon starts to fade
and the darkness gets brighter.
The bats shadow passes
like a sneaky ninja and
dissappear into the night!

Another day is coming
and no sight of the night!

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Cartoon from https://Bitmoji.com and my Samsung galaxy S5 neo

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I can't belive I just published it.. OMG πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

Thank you for reading and probably laughing like I did... Lol

I go and hide now.... Find me 😜 lol

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Β  Β· Β 7 years agoΒ 

Very nice! You should write more for sure !!

Thank you my friend!
Well I don't know what to write, photograph I know but writing is not my usual area... Lol
Have a wonderful weekend. Cheers!

Β  Β· Β 7 years agoΒ 

Check some Photos of Grand Canyon I took .

https://steemit.com/photography/@jkenny/grand-canyon-amazing-site

They were really amazing πŸ˜‰ thx

I love this poem! It's spooky and fun and spontaneous all at once. I'm so glad you posted! Now, you are hooked. Tomorrow is Day 100 for freewrite and we will need all hands on deck... 🀞

Β  Β· Β 7 years agoΒ (edited)

Wait.... Another? πŸ™ˆ ohh.. Gosh!
What does that mean? I have to write another? πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚hahaha Yes when elephant flies!
Thank you for being so amazing my dear friend.
You really push me out of my comfort zone.

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πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚hahaha
OK damn... You got me there!
Cute... I love Dumbo just... now I have to do another writing... 😜 oyegosh!

Β  Β· Β 7 years agoΒ 

Great job @saffisara you had capturing characters! Exciting things happen outside your comfort zone! Keep going!

Thank you so much sweetie πŸ˜‰
Yes this is really outside of my comfort zone... Lol I'm no writer and I usually write as I speak so how can you do that in a poem? 😁😁hahaha
Have a wonderful weekend. Cheers!

Β  Β· Β 7 years agoΒ 

Adds to the challenge and makes it fun! Way to go!

Β  Β· Β 7 years agoΒ 

Wonderful. I can feel your embarrassment, I can see your smile. You put yourself in words. Great nice girl πŸ’Ž

Thank you very much!
Yes I was unsure about publishing it, just seems like rumbling nonsense to me πŸ˜„ lol
I'm no writer so a new road for me.
Have a wonderful weekend. Cheers!

Nice use of imagery. Plus extra points for the Batman part.

Thank you so much! Yes that batman part Suprised me to, have no idea were that came from 😁 lol
Have a wonderful weekend. Cheers!

Β  Β· Β 7 years agoΒ 

Very nice!

Thank you very much!

why are you regretting it, spooky and fun this was so well done :)

I see what you did there πŸ˜‰

Guilty but was multi tasking and rushing lol

Because it's so not my area and I'm no poet.. I even thought a poem had to rhyme.. Lol
And the batman thing..... So not planned and you se what happens when I'm force into doing things I don't normally do 😁😁hahaha
Thank you Jay, your always so sweet and great friend πŸ˜ŽπŸ€— Have a wonderful weekend!

I did one of these it’s not my thing either
But honestly you did really πŸ‘ great

It’s going s to get out of our comfort zone sometimes

Yes I know you also have done some things out of your comfort zone and you have done great. And I think we actually learn new things about our selves when we do dare to go out of our zone 😊
I always knew that I write whatever pops up in my head but not even I knew what crazy stuff I was hiding πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚hahaha
Well it was fun to try and today I'm doing another freewrite together with Amelia. Really hope I don't mess it up... Lol
Have a wonderful day Jay πŸ€—πŸ˜Ž

You won’t mess it up
Just relax and let the writing flow
You will do great so
πŸ‘Έ ✍️ πŸ‘ΈβœοΈπŸ€”βœ…

The struggle between light and darkness in nature. Nobody ever wins. It creates a beautiful setting in which even the strangest creatures thrive. My thematic analysis. Good one.

That is a beautiful way to express it πŸ˜‰ like that.
Thank you very much, means a lot!
Have a wonderful weekend. Cheers!

Β  Β· Β 7 years agoΒ 

that was very nice
thank you @ameliabartlett for making her do this :D
sometimes her creativity just needs to be forced out ;)

Really? You know what happens when you push me to do crazy things 😁😁hahaha
Kidding! Thank you for being so supportive and sweet πŸ€— may the force keep coming πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

Β  Β· Β 7 years agoΒ 

I hope the force! not the dark force
otherwise we wont stop writing about zombies, bats, witches and bloody stuff πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

Yes the dark force really seem to put us on weard paths... πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚hahaha
Wonder how light force would be, would we write about angels, fairys? Lol
Have a wonderful weekend my friend. Cheers!

Β  Β· Β 7 years agoΒ 

haha and buttelflies and babies
bon weekend
twin πŸ˜‰

😁hahaha Yes and cakes and cookies and umpaloompa.. Lol

Wow. Lovely poem sweetie. You are getting poetic now :-) how would it sound Poetess Saffarisa :-) lolz . Regards Nainaz.
#thealliance

Thank you so much my friend 😊 so sweet!
No I'm no poet, I even thought a poem needed to rhyme so I was like.... This can't be right πŸ˜‚
Really out of my comfort zone but fun to try.
Have a wonderful weekend. Cheers! πŸ€—

Β  Β· Β 7 years agoΒ 

This is cool. Lol. Which tag is morenonsense? Haha.

Thank you so much my friend πŸ˜‰
Yeah I was gonna use rambling to as that was my thought when I saw what I wrote 😁😁lol
But after nonsense I just had to make that tag anothernonsense... Lol
Have a wonderful weekend. Cheers!

Β  Β· Β 7 years agoΒ 

Lol. Ok

You are too funny. Telling yourself and us that you are not a writer! Love that poem!!

Aww.. Thank you my friend 😊 means a lot.
Funny you all se a poem when all I se is rumbling nonsense 😁😁hahaha
But I'm learning. Happy you liked it.
Have a wonderful weekend and thank you for having this wonderful freewrite πŸ€—πŸ’•

Β  Β· Β 7 years agoΒ 

So, this is why my ears have been burning. Great job. You'll fit in well here. I hope you do more. Allow me to deliver today's special prompt.

To celebrate freewrite number βœ΄πŸ’―βœ΄
we have a special challenge to go along with today's prompt. Good luck and have fun! πŸŽˆπŸŽ‰

Day 100 - 5 Minute Freewrite Prompt: It was Saturday morning...

Yes that's probably why.. Lol
Thank you so much, means a lot as this is completely new to me 😊
Yes I will do the todays freewrite with a friend and I hope it turns out well... Lol
Yeay to the 100 πŸ€—
Have a wonderful weekend. Cheers!

It's spooky as well as fun. I enjoyed reading this.

Thank you very much sweetie πŸ€—
Glad you liked it! Have a great weekend.

Wow, how is that your first? That was awesome. Love the batman part too.

AWwww... Thank you so much my friend 😊
Such sweet thing to say.
Yeah that Batman part wasn't planned and have no idea were it came from 😁😁hahaha
Have a wonderful weekend. Cheers!

You're welcome. For being a split second thing, it was perfect. Who doesn't love Batman, lol. Hope you have a wonderful weekend too.

Yes I always write what pops up in my mind and not always a good thing... Lol
Was a little worried about this outcome.
Thank you again 😊 cheers!