Description of a Bird
We were made to breach the sky,
Winged hearts with future eyes.
With steady strokes
we drift
and soar,
meant to land
on distant shores.
When we nest,
we seek a place,
high above, from threats
and safe.
Our young, so fragile
left alone,
rely on us to make their home.
We nourish, feed,
and help them grow
until at last they leap,
we know
for all the world,
we've done the right
as up our fledglings
master flight.
I am a member of the @freewritehouse growing community! Come and see all the exciting new things happening and try your hand at a 5 minute freewrite daily! Today's prompt describe a bird
Discord
Freewriters now have our own room in the Isle of Write Discord!
Here is the link to join: https://discord.gg/zfXNRnK
The Make a Minnow project is an initiative designed to reward those who are exceptional in the minnowsupport community, the prize is a 5k delegation for a month!
So pretty. I love it. @)--`---
Downvoting a post can decrease pending rewards and make it less visible. Common reasons:
Submit
Thank you my sweet friend!
Downvoting a post can decrease pending rewards and make it less visible. Common reasons:
Submit
You are very welcome @wandrnrose7..Hmm, I just now noticed the 7 in your name. Guess I should pay more attention, lol.
Downvoting a post can decrease pending rewards and make it less visible. Common reasons:
Submit
lol many overlook the 7, no worries, dear!
Downvoting a post can decrease pending rewards and make it less visible. Common reasons:
Submit
Oh, this is a real gem!
I love these 5-minute freewrites. I think all of my favorite work has at least come from a fast word flow.
There is magic in soaring.
Downvoting a post can decrease pending rewards and make it less visible. Common reasons:
Submit
Thank you so much for your kind comment! Yes, I am discovering this as well!
Downvoting a post can decrease pending rewards and make it less visible. Common reasons:
Submit
Lovely, the first segment (ending with "on distant shores.") in particular is very light in form and carries you along as you read it.
I always like and am amazed when people go for free-write poems. Good job :)
Downvoting a post can decrease pending rewards and make it less visible. Common reasons:
Submit
Thank you. I only ever knew freeform having never studied proper forms, but I want to! More on my study list, @geekorner!
Downvoting a post can decrease pending rewards and make it less visible. Common reasons:
Submit
I meant free-write as in @mariannewest's, I only really write free-form as well :)
I actually like it more.
But it is fun to experiment, even if only to find out home is where you started :D
Downvoting a post can decrease pending rewards and make it less visible. Common reasons:
Submit
Oh my, your peoms read so well, I feel mystified that you call them free form! I like that analogy of home is where you started!
Downvoting a post can decrease pending rewards and make it less visible. Common reasons:
Submit
Such a beautiful poem and the perfect image to go with it! Love both! : )
Downvoting a post can decrease pending rewards and make it less visible. Common reasons:
Submit
Thank you so much, dear. I was so happy to find such a good image that fit the message!
Downvoting a post can decrease pending rewards and make it less visible. Common reasons:
Submit
so sweet - and the picture!!! :)
Downvoting a post can decrease pending rewards and make it less visible. Common reasons:
Submit
Thanks @mariannewest. I was surprised to find that when I went looking and thought perfect!
Downvoting a post can decrease pending rewards and make it less visible. Common reasons:
Submit
Love what you did with it. It was a difficult prompt.
Downvoting a post can decrease pending rewards and make it less visible. Common reasons:
Submit
Thank you. I agree, I wasn't clear on my path on that one.
Downvoting a post can decrease pending rewards and make it less visible. Common reasons:
Submit
This has a great rythm, so flowing ☺️
Downvoting a post can decrease pending rewards and make it less visible. Common reasons:
Submit
Thank you, dear @f3nix, I'm so sleepy tonight it's a small effort I have given. <3
Downvoting a post can decrease pending rewards and make it less visible. Common reasons:
Submit