RE: Consequences of playing with time; Life is Strange - Review

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Consequences of playing with time; Life is Strange - Review

in gaming •  6 years ago 

You should make the version in English. I am not sure did you google translate it from Spanish or not. Secondly, you should not add scentence by putting comma and making it too long. It loses the meaning of a sentence and become hard for reader concentrate what you want to say. It seemed fine review but I couldnt finish reading as I became so complicated because of your sentence formations.

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Thank you for taking the time to see my publication, I really find it difficult to translate the publications and I do everything possible for the reader to understand, I will take your suggestion into account for my next post. Regards:)