Wonders unending
original poetry
I bestow gratitude
through angular pidgeon-routes
that return periodically–
they whisper succulence of change
into the fuzz of my earlobe.
I am–full stop–
and yet descriptors gravitate
to my tortoise body - amber mountain
pausing at the foggy overlook.
You are, yet undetectable,
Insidious fibre - cryptic asset unobtainable,
Monochrome unicorn - God & Science–
Unattainable blasphemy of ascension,
Lavender Monocle, mustachioed rabbit.
Roaring with the sanguinary chorus,
Heartfelt praise - burnished song,
I cry thankfulness into the mocking void!
I scream joy into the grey river of time
& it answers me with wonders unending.
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Gratitude is a powerful force,
May we remember to activate it daily!
Have an excellent day - Wholeness & much love!
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Created by
@d-pend
1/15/18
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You are on fire today. Great poem. And great images! Do you write all your poems longhand before typing them up? Wonderful. I do the same. I thought I was the only one crazy enough to do that. At least I'm probably the only one crazy enough to use a blackwings pencil, etching all posts and haiku in my field notes memobook, boxes of which I will probably leave to my kids after I am gone so they can scratch their heads at how strange their pop was.
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Hey @dbooster, thanks! I used to write everything by hand religiously back in 2011-2013 when I first was writing poetry (kinda stopped after that) and these days I'd estimate I write about 60% by hand. I've learned to like typing for compositions as well, but they definitely turn out more organic when writing longhand first. Especially for more emotional pieces, there's more of a connection when writing by hand. Plus - it's just really satisfying! That's awesome that you keep that! I have a ridiculous amount of writing scraps saved lol... it's funny because I often make edits when typing up that I am too lazy to put back in the original, so you would need the STEEM blockchain + my notes to see the full picture :-D
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@d-pend - I like the visual imagery you create through flowing words in this poem. Especially, the grey river of time showing us wonders... I do not know why but I suddenly remembered Rick Riordan's Percy series of novels. Perhaps because there is a river Styx in it that is full of unfullfilled dreams - among other things.
Thanks. Upvoted through steemfollower.
Regards,
@vm2904
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Thank you. So exciting. A poem that challenges me to "cry thankfulness" into the mocking void!" Sometimes there is no response. But your poem finishes, "I scream joy into the grey river of time & it answers me with wonders unending." You did well to keep this poem. It is very sincere. Thank you for including us in your world.
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You are specially inspired today. Your poetry is unbeliavable - you are the master of poetry my friend. Thank you for this amazing day @d-pend
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Thank you for your friendship and creative inspiration @dobartim!
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I'm glad I have a great example in your work
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He sure is. Never disappoints. Keep up the good work bro, @d-pend.
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Thanks @rasamuel my friend
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The poem is very beautiful. I look forward to more poetry like this. The lines of this poem that impressed me are:
I am–full stop–
and yet descriptors gravitate
to my tortoise body - amber mountain
pausing at the foggy overlook.
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Amazing yr.. I really became fan of your .. today your just rock. As just i thought .. definitely great work as well as everyone thought .. as now again i am looking foreword to next
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great writing,read to love it
thanks for sharing
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Wow... great your post @d-pend
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This poem is more wonderful than I imagined
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@d-pend, I have no more words tell your effort. Nice to decided to share of wonders-unending. Why you take decision leave from child? I have to say that, I can't stay without my own babe. Currently follow up with criptocurrency guy. need to recommet them.
Very sad to hear bad babies
Thank you for massive message.
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I have to keep a dictionary to read your poems 😅.
Awesome work as always. Keep it up 😃.
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Wow.... This is one of the best poem have ever read on steemit
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