RE: PLAY an Anglo~Haïku by ZenJoy

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PLAY an Anglo~Haïku by ZenJoy

in haiku •  7 years ago 

Loose should be lose. Other than that, you have a good message coming through here. All the best.

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Thanks for the feedback...

It's pretty amazing when you think about it, that I have written over a hundred poems here on steemit and you come along to correct one word that makes you more money than a hundred of my Haïkus... We can chalk it up to online poetic justice!

ps Spelling is Arbitrary, especially with ARTis+s

Enjoy, Ravi@ZENjoy

https://steemit.com/haiku/@zenjoy/spelling-an-anglo-haiku-by-zenjoy

I'm just trying to leave a helpful comment other than the usual "good job" and "nice work."