RE: Untitled Entry for Mizu No Oto Haiku Contest #45

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Untitled Entry for Mizu No Oto Haiku Contest #45

in haikucontest •  5 years ago 

Very nice. The repetition of the 's' sound ties the haiku together, as does the linking of water and sky. There's a peaceful sense of connected existence.

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      ·  5 years ago 

    Thanks! It sounded right to me but I didn't actually notice that about the Ss...

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        ·  5 years ago 

      That's the nice thing about writing...poetry or any other form. Sometimes a natural rhythm sets in, your ear takes over for you and makes the magic happen :)

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