Tropical evening/@prydefoltz/haikusaturday

in haikusaturday •  6 years ago  (edited)

tropical evening -
five furious mosquitos
killed together

mosquito.png

Poem by Bacus15
Photo from Pixabay

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  ·  6 years ago (edited)

feed here together
you will surely die here too
for this blood's no good

commented. then decided to haiku ;)

Btw, i am following you :) .

Hahahaha. For the best way to comment poem is by poem :) .

Mosquitos can and so ruin the evening. Great pivot work:)

Thank you! Also for motivation to write my first original haiku in English :) .

I live in a tropical country, mosquitoes are always angry and willing to die for blood.

Hi, @bacus!
Nothing stings more
that the rage of a mosquito
furious and hungry

!Pobre mosquitos¡

Yes, but poor humans too ;) .