In the silence....
I am yours,
Each faint breath,
A gift,
My spirit, ebbing,
As, softly, my tides,
Wash, upon the shores,
Of ancient creation,
All the peoples of the world,
Are gathered within a valley,
The commanding mountain peaks,
High above them,
Uncountable voices shouting,
Straining, to be understood,
Chaotic sea of screams, as each man,
Tries his voice, against the rest,
Approaching, from above, a cloud,
From mountain, silhouetted majesty,
A face within, of terrible power, takes form,
And the sky, turns black, as coal,
Your voice, a deep sound,
Alive, powerful, resonant,
The commanding, mountain peaks,
A humble audience, to Your glory,
The spoken words, a name,
I Am... and so, you are,
The foundation of the Earth,
Quakes in fear, at the sound,
Everyone is silent now,
And so, I am, Silent,
For, I Am, speaks,
And in my silence,
I am Yours.
-Original poem, by Jonathan Caleb Williams @badseedalchemist.
This is, Beautiful,
My soul is stirred within.
I love you.
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And I love you, very much, darling.
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This is so beautiful! I feel like it has touched my soul! Thank you for sharing!
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I am glad that you liked it. :) The poem entails a combination between a dream that I had when I was twelve and some of my inner thoughts while meditating yesterday.
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Nice
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Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. :)
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Nice
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Thank you. :)
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@badseedalchemist Muy apreciado amigo, excelente poema, que nos presenta una profundidad de pensamiento de enorme significado. me gustaría referirme solo a la ultima estrofa, que resumen el final.
"TODOS ESTÁN EN SILENCIO AHORA, Y ASÍ, YO ESTOY (mejor aun "YO SOY"),SILENCIO". Según las sagradas escrituras de todas las creencias humanas, dejan con claridad expresa, que solo es posible la comunicación con el creador, cuando se esta en silencio (no solo en ausencia del sonido, sino de pensamientos).
PORQUE, YO SOY, HABLA Y EN MI SILENCIO, YO SOY TUYO. Cuando la percepción hace posible esta realidad, solo lo que es, puede ser y entonces en ese silencio YO SOY TUYO, o mas bien (yo soy tu y tu eres yo) se evidencia que ya no hace falta el sonido ni el pensar, Lo que es, no necesita reconocerse a si mismo.
Bien, hasta aquí esta reflexión, -Realmente me toco por dentro este poema tan hermoso-. felicitaciones y un abrazo fuerte.
que tenga un maravilloso día.***
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Muchas gracias para la resquesta a mi poema, amigo closado. Usivimos las palabras para a saber, que estamos, solo, y Dios es contigo, y conmigo el mismo, tambien. :)
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@badseedalchemist Soy yo quien agradece por brindarnos un poema de tal profundidad y elegancia, he leído con mucho placer y he disfrutado de su poema, tanto que aun siento sus palabras.
Gracias una ves mas y espero seguir disfrutando de sus post. Por cierto tenia mucho tiempo que no leía un poema, que me impresionara tan gratamente como el suyo.
Un abrazo grande y que tenga un buen día.
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