The love changed my life dream
"I love him every second of my life
You gave me support
I got confidence now I can conquer the World height"
"As you hold my hand secured
Your love warmth was my universe
I feel this is real life
The smiles comes from the heart"
"I become more strong
Everyday i realized my luck is love
Love is life filled with emotions
How high I was flying"
"It was not dreaming
It was reality of life
You made my World colorful
But every dream has to end"
"Suddenly you awake me
You are no more with me
You broke me from inside
My universe lost all colors"
"My hands are empty
My heart is bleeding
As the little baby weep
On losing her toys"
"You made me cry cry cry
Now love is no more
Love is ended
You made me realized"
"Everything is fake
You played with my feelings
But now I am strong
No love no more love "
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Beautiful poem as I was expecting coming from a sentimental person like you. The true love is not short lived but it remains forever maybe sometimes you might feel a distance but is that permanent? It makes you cry but in the end true lovers either meet forever or go the their final destination. Remember Heer and Ranjha?
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How lovely you respond and love is eternal in my view well quoted example of Heer Ranjha they were just true lovers and their eternal love become example for us.
Thank you stay blessed.
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What an interesting beginning and sad ending could this be, wow love is really a powerful magic that can take someone to another world without paying transportation.
The lines in your poem is something worth reading especially the from stanza one to stanza four. I wish it never ended.
Love has a positive and negative side effects, it can donate to a great happiness and a light that brighten the day even in the night, when love strikes, it results in heartbreak, depression, emotionally damage, i can picture all of these in your poem.
Sometimes we're unlucky to stay in relationship with the right person, at this point love looks like a fake but it doesn't, i accept the fact that fake love exists but trust me, true love exists too.
Honestly speaking, stanza five to eight is so touching and heartbreaking, i screenshot this post to my WhatsApp status, my friends needs to see it too.
Screenshot from my WhatsApp status.
I want to ask, is this poem a true life story?
You punished a nice story, keep it up.
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I never received such warm love from comment ever I am feeling honored and pleased thank you dear friend for your support and yeah its my true life poem which is going on with me.
Blessings
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It was always hurt when the person we love, trust and give our hearts to later turns to break it down, i feel how painful and heartbroken that was and i must admit the moment was really complicated to endure.
I feel sorry for the all messed up, i believe you'll soon be okay. Take heart 💜
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Hola Drhira
A leerte recorde esos sentimientos que nos invaden cuando tenemos a un ser especial en nuestras vidas, sentirnos amados, especiales y renovados cada día.
Pero que al perderlos nos dejan un sin sabor, nos destrozan el alma por su ausencia, ese dolor de no poder abrazarlo y entender que el amor se desvanecio.
Que el amor toque tu vida sin destruirte, sin dañarte y sin hacerte llorar, sueña, vive, ríe y no dejes de sentir, hay quiénes dañan, pero otros son para siempre.
Bendiciones, un fuerte abrazo.
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Thank you for such valuable feedback on my poem indeed you are right. I appreciate your time.
Blessings
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Es triste que después de vivir momentos de felicidad y mucho amor, todo se rompe, al punto de llegar al final. Hasta no querer amar más. Pero creo que no se puede cerrar la puerta del amor. Todo pasa por algo, pueden vivir mejores momentos de felicidad y mucho amor de verdad.
No te niegues a una nueva experiencia. ¿Qué dices?
Saludos y mucho éxito.
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Hola amiga!
Creo que tanto las sonrisas como las lágrimas vienen del corazón, las sonrisas son llenas de alegría y de ilusión, hacen que tú corazón salte de felicidad, el amor te llena de colores y te hace ver el mundo con emoción y entusiasmo.
Pero cuando todo acaba, ves la vida con desilusión y tu mundo se torna en gris, crees que hiciste algo malo o no fuiste suficiente, pero una vez que nuestro corazón haya sanado, la ilusión vuelve, asi sea la ilusión de ver un nuevo amanecer.
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A good comment, I hope you receive a reply
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Hola
Cuando lei tu poema, me identifique pues yo pase por una experiencia similar, es dificil cuando una persona es nuestro mundo y luego ya es tristeza y dolor. es muy dificil.
Saludos!
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Yeah my dear friend sometimes there is entry of wrong person in life and we experience of pain and suffering only. May Allah support us.
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Welcome to Dream Steem!
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Thank you so much
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