Hay palabras con las que estoy peleado.
Al encontrarme con ellas, entro en desasosiego,
En la inseguridad de cómo actuar.
Recuerdo a mi padre; Dios...
cuán difícil me resultaba hablar con él.
Planificar es una de esas “palabrotas” antes las cuales me siento indefenso, cual conejo.
Recuerdo la universidad, mi carrera docente
Profesores tuve muy buenos, en metodología y planificación
Pero algo pasaba conmigo, para mí era lo mismo:
Objetivo general, Objetivo específico, fines, metas y el bendito plan.
Incapaz de diferenciarlos.
Planes hice papá, de cómo llegarme hasta ti.
¿Alguno funciono?
Pa´ de alguna manera haré que me veas.
Huir a un mundo de fantasías,
O encontrarte tras el espejo,
Pá, ¿Recuerdas que me presentaste a Alicia?
Cuánto amabas criar conejos.
Al planificar, me voy a los extremos,
Entre la incertidumbre caótica de un descontrolado cambio de planes,
O la compulsiva rigidez de ejecutar lo planificado, tal y como se escribió,
Cueste lo que cueste
al punto de no dejar espacios para respirar.
¡¡¡Dios!!!...
Cuánto amo cambiar de planes.
English Version
There are words that I am at odds with.
When I encounter them, I become restless,
Unsure of how to act.
I remember my father; God...
how difficult it was for me to talk to him.
Planning is one of those “bad words” that I feel helpless before, like a rabbit.
I remember college, my teaching career
I had very good teachers, in methodology and planning
But something was wrong with me, for me it was the same:
General objective, specific objective, ends, goals and the blessed plan.
Unable to differentiate them.
I made plans, Dad, on how to get to you.
Did any of them work?
Pa, somehow I'll make you see me.
Run away to a fantasy world,
Or find you behind the mirror,
Dad, do you remember that you introduced me to Alice?
How much you loved raising rabbits.
When planning, I go to extremes,
Between the chaotic uncertainty of an uncontrolled change of plans,
Or the compulsive rigidity of executing what was planned, just as it was written,
Whatever the cost
to the point of not leaving room to breathe.
God!!!...
How I love changing plans.
Comentarios // Comments.
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What is it, the saying? We make our plans and God has His. Better to be ready to have a change in our plans. Being patient and letting things sit for a while or as they say, "Sleep on it" can help make things become more clear. The situation can be a bit of roller coaster ride. Which is what I experienced reading your post.
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Hi @jiva34
In Venezuela we have a similar saying:
"Man proposes, God disposes"
Your comment made me feel "understood", thank you for your words and that image that portrays me in one of those moments of contention with some "bad word". See you friend.
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Hello @joslud
You want liberation in change embracing spontaneity with flexibility without control of life, balancing in plan without anxiety.
You also confused with planing and methodology.
I couldn't understand the emotional connection of planning with difficulty talking to father.
You also disagreed to constantly changing plan as well as sticking to plan with rigidity. Greetings.
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Hi @impersonal
You know, I agree with you on something? I don't think I've written something to be "understood" under the logic of cause and effect. 🤔
I reread the text, and I think it shows more how my thoughts flow and the associations I make about a topic.
If you dare to understand in another way, follow the rabbit's trail. 😉
Thanks for taking your time to read and comment, friend.
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Thank you for valuable advice.
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Hi friend, I can see your desire to change plans just to benefit you, I can actually agree with you because I have once changed my mind towards something. I will be participating in this challenge if you don't mind you can find out in my entry how I changed my mind.
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Hola
Ya leí tu entrada amiga, te dejé un comentario
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Hola @evagavilan
Amiga, el análisis que haces de la frase de L. Carrol, más tu frase: "una fuerza que algunos llaman destino"me hizo "-caer la locha.", me llevó a otra de C. Jung:
Ahorita ya veo y entró en equilibrio, Carrol en un extremo y Jung en el otro. Tomo consciencia de mi necesidad de buscar un equilibrio, pues vivir en incertidumbre me aleja de la paz.
Este escrito ha resultado, enriquecedor para entenderme... gracias por tu aporte.
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Saludos @joslud.
Eso suele suceder, una palabra lleva a otra y descubrimos que faltaba un pequeño enlace para hallar una respuesta.
Esa es la ventaja de poder emitir opiniones libres y si le sirven a alguien bienvenidas sean.
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A great comment! I hope you receive an answer.
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Hola amigo 🤗 le diría al protagonista: Decídete vale jaja, pero vive. Siempre en nuestra juventud vamos por la vida tratando de adaptarnos, por una parte están las normas que nos impone la sociedad y por otra el espíritu libre que vive en nosotros.Queda de cada quien lograr ese equilibrio,romper el circulo y liberarse.
Las relaciones padre- hijo cuando son tan complicadas dejan huellas, espero que el protagonista de la historia encuentre paz y se libere de sentimientos que le impidan ser feliz, coloque las experiencias negativas en un baul y tire la llave.
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Hola @marito74
Pasa que ese protagonista es obsesivo-compulsivo. 🤪🤣🤣 Pedirle que tome una decisión es ponerle un imposible al frente.
Si, de seguro encontrará (encontré) paz... gracias amiga
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