RE: Writing course / Curso de escritura / Cambio de planes

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Writing course / Curso de escritura / Cambio de planes

in hive-107855 •  2 months ago  (edited)
La bella Andreina enfrentó literalmente el hecho de un cambio de planes respecto a su deseo arraigdo de tener una familia numerosa con su ser amado, al inicio, sentí su profunda decepción al ver sus sueños postergados por motivos exógenos; luego, dolor por una perdida entrañable que solo Dios sabe.

Pero luego, percibi solo satisfacción al estar abrazada a sus retoños , aceptando la voluntad de Dios perfecta.

En función del párrafo final de tu relato me preguntó:

Si tuvieras la oportunidad de adoptar a un niño necesitado del amor de la familia que le fue negada; lo adoptarias?.

Bendiciones!

#wewriter

#wewriter03.

English

The beautiful Andreina literally faced the fact of a change of plans regarding her deep-rooted desire to have a large family with her loved one. At the beginning, I felt her deep disappointment at seeing her dreams postponed for exogenous reasons; then, pain for an endearing loss that only God knows.

But then, she perceived only satisfaction in being embraced by her children, accepting the perfect will of God.

Based on the final paragraph of your story, he asked me:

If you had the opportunity to adopt a child in need of the love of the family that was denied to him; Would you adopt him?

Blessings!

#wewriter

#wewriter03.

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