The leopards legacy

in hive-107855 •  21 days ago  (edited)

Amobi is raised to value western culture over his Igbo heritage in a colonial school. But his life changed, when he starts having nightmares of transforming into leopard, a revered symbol in Igbo tradition. When he tells his teachers and classmates about it, they dismissed it as mere superstition. Only his parents took it seriously and consult a “dibia,” a ghost whisperer. The dibia reveals that Amobi has been chosen by the ancestral leopard spirit, granting him unique powers to protect his community.


This revelation leaves him torn between his love for western culture and his inherited responsibilities. With time, he begins to see his dreams not as a curse but as a gift and learns to harness the leopard spirit within him. He grows from a timid boy into a confident guy, giving him respect among friends. He learns to harmonize both worlds, finding strength in his dual identity.

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The “bottle leopard” is a popular story among Nigerians and it was written by chukwuemeka Ike. The boy “Amobi” is like every African child who find it hard to relate with their own tradition because of the western culture we have adopted. A lot of Nigerians today don’t know anything about their traditions and can’t speak their traditional dialect apart from English language. The writer is trying to advise us not to see African traditions as an obstacle to success but as source of wisdom that enriches our identity and try to find a balance between the western culture and the African heritage.

The leopard in ibo culture signifies strength and agility and is popularly called “isiagu”. It’s one of the popular attire by the igbos.

Cc: @joslud
@solperez

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A cuddly kitten ;-)) Okay. Powerful, majestic. But kitten ;-))

"@sbamsoneu, your story "The Leopard's Legacy" masterfully explores the tension between cultural heritage and Western influence. Amobi's transformation from a timid boy to a confident individual is captivating.

The cultural references to Igbo tradition and the symbolism of the leopard spirit are fascinating. Your narrative effectively conveys the importance of embracing one's roots.

I appreciate how your story encourages readers to reflect on their own cultural identities and the significance of balancing modernity with tradition.

One suggestion: consider integrating the moral lessons more organically throughout the narrative, allowing readers to infer and connect with Amobi's journey on a deeper level.

Your writing has sparked an interesting discussion about cultural identity and the importance of preserving ancestral traditions. Well done!

#microwrite01

Cc. @joslud @solperez

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Hello there sbamsoneu :)

Your story, "The Leopard's Legacy," beautifully explores the theme of balancing Western culture and Igbo heritage through Amobi's journey. I would say that the character development is commendable, and the cultural references add significant depth.

A teeny tiny suggestion if you don't mind me: For clarity, it may help to distinguish where the story ends and the explanation begins. Additionally, incorporating the moral more subtly instead of stating it directly, could allow the readers to derive it from Amobi’s experiences and decisions.

Overall, it’s a thoughtful piece with much promise!

#microwrite

@solperez @joslud

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Saludos, amigo @sbamsoneu:

Esta es una excelente historia, cuyo propósito fundamental es rescatar los valores culturales del país, amenazados por un idioma y unas costumbres extrañas. Había una gran oportunidad allí para un relato pleno de tensión dramática con los sueños de ese niño que lo inducen a rebelarse y a transformarse en una persona por completo diferente. Su texto nos explica muy bien las significaciones de la historia, pero le faltó crear un conflicto psicológico o social que intensificara la atención del lector y los diferentes momentos del argumento... Sin embargo es atractiva y bien estructurada su prosa, además interesantísimo lo que nos comparte en su publicación.

Éxitos, amigo.

#microwrite01

@joslud y @solperez

halo sbamsoneu, amobi anak modern yang lahir di belahan barat harus menerima kenyataan bahwa dia sekarang harus menanggung bahwa dirinya sudah di rasuki roh macan tutul dan menjadi orang yang di hormati dari suku nigeria, mau ataupun tidak dia harus menerima nasibnya.

amobi yang dulunya pemalu tidak peduli dengan sekitar sekarang merasa bahwa ternyata dirinya penting , dirinya di hormati dan dianggap sebagai titisan dewa macan tutul, dia jadi bangga dan senang dengan perolehan tersebut.

cerita ini sebagai tanda bahwa asal terjadinya roh macan tutul yang merasuki seorang maak laki-laki nigeria yang sangat di puja oleh komunitas mereka dimanapun mereka berada, baik di kampung asli mereka afrika atau masyarakat yang sudah tinggal di daerah perkotaan seperti amerika.

anda menyampaikan bahwa anak afrika jangan malu untuk menjadi titisan roh macam, karena itu dapat menyeimbangkan antara modernisasi dan indentitas kita.

saya jadi paham ternyata indentitas kita sebagai mahluk jangan di buang walaupun tinggal di daerah yang modern.

cc.
@joslud
@solperez

Excelente comentario en el que se da muestra de una lectura comprensiva del texto y reflexiona con respecto a la misma. Bien hecho,

  ·  21 days ago (edited)

Hi, @sbamsoneu
Impressive and very powerful.

Please clarify:

  1. Where does your story end, and where does the explanation begin?
  2. Do you need to explain your shortstory to the reader?

The ancestral leopard spirit, I wouldn't do that, I would just roar and let the rest react as they wish, what do you think?


I don't want to evaluate yet.
Please just delimit with a line or mark, where exactly the story ends.


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  ·  21 days ago (edited)

Greetings, @sbamsoneu
Your story in Canva.com format
You can share it on your social networks.

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Subtask 1 for you:

As you mention that not all Nigerian children know their ancestral languages. I ask you to investigate and present this story in one of the "non-colonial" languages ​​of your country.
I will be waiting to pay tribute to your ancestors.

Subtask 2 for you:

Read this post and answer the questions left at the end of it.

https://steemit.com/microwrite01/@joslud/write-in-micro-size-slc-s21-w1-or-impresiones-con-relacion-a-la-tarea-1-del-curso-de-escritura-de-microrrelatos

Amamos la cultura africana tan rica y encantadora. Te cuento que los venezolanos somos producto de un mestizaje que incluye al africano, nuestra comida, bailes, son en parte gracias a nuestros ancestros que llegaron como esclavos a estas tierras.

La leyenda que narras es atrayente, con ese lado misterioso y salvaje propio de este hermoso animal, las tradiciones se están perdiendo y no sólo en áfrica amigo mío, la tranculturización ha tenido mucho impacto pero mientrás aún existan escritores dandolo todo esa semillita dará frutos, se propagará.

We love the African culture so rich and charming. I tell you that Venezuelans are the product of a miscegenation that includes the African, our food, dances, are partly thanks to our ancestors who came as slaves to these lands.

The legend you narrate is attractive, with that mysterious and wild side of this beautiful animal, the traditions are being lost and not only in Africa my friend, the tranculturization has had much impact but as long as there are still writers giving it all that little seed will bear fruit, it will spread.

#microwrite
C.C

@joslud @solperez

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