Deutsch im Anschluß…
I'm going to lead with my own example in this round to illustrate once again how the task is to be roughly understood. The German and English texts do not correspond to each other; the translation of my account name would have changed the sequence of letters...
A certain pathos is certainly noticeable in both versions: sorry - I just felt like it ;-))
WEISSER-RABE
W
hen the night falls, it takes to the sky,
E
ver silent, as the winds softly sigh.
I
n feathers of white, a ghostly hue,
S
erene in flight, against the dark blue.
S
earching the shadows, with eyes so keen,
E
nveloped in mystery, rarely seen.
R
esting on branches, a brief reprieve,
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R
eveling in moonlight, she takes its leave.
A
lone but unlonely, in the night's deep call,
B
raving the darkness, she stands tall.
E
ternal guardian, of the starry night…
Berlin, 22nd March 2024
Deutsche Version:
Ich gehe bei dieser Runde mit einem eigenen Beispiel voran, um noch einmal zu illustrieren, wie die Aufgabe in etwa zu verstehen ist. Der deutsche und der englische Text entsprechen einander nicht; die Übersetzung meines Account-Namens hätte ja die Buchstabenfolge verändert…
Ein gewisser Pathos ist sicher in beiden Versionen bemerkbar: entschuldigt – mir war gerade so ;-))
WEISSER-RABE
W
ie ein Schatten, der unaufhaltsam durch die Zeit streift,
E
insam, doch frei in der Luft, nach der sie greift.
I
n weißen Gefiedern, recht sanft und rein,
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chwebt sie durch die Lüfte mit stetigem Schein.
S
till und bedächtig, doch stets voller Leben,
E
in Rabe so weiß, als könne sie schweben.
R
uhig und weise, bereitet sich vor.
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R
aumgreifend ihr Flug, steigt stetig empor.
A
ls Bote der Stille, des Friedens und Lichts,
B
egleitet sie Träume, durchdringt sie ganz dicht.
E
in Bote der Hoffnung, ein Zeichen verspricht…
Berlin, 22. März 2024
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Both versions are good but I like the German better... Especially the last sentence. I hope the white raven will always stay close.
May I ask how you made those red letters since I couldn't figure it out.
A great Sunday to you.
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Of course; There are different ways for red letters; I use:
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Thank you so much. Another code to try out. Are there different colours or red only?
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You can generate several colours with html codes - but unfortunately these do not work on the Steem. So red and green remain (in connection with a #...)
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Thank you I'll try it out. 🤗🍀
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You did it perfectly with each line telling its meaning to take us to the world where you wanted us to go!
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Follow me ;-))
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I am a dove, I can't follow a weisser rabe 😄
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