Hi @paakow, Thank you for taking interest in the 3rd Task of the Beginners Fixed Class. Your grades are as follows:
| Assessment Aspects | Rating |
|---|---|
| Presentation/Use of Markdowns | 0.5 / 2 |
| Follow Rules and Guideline | 1.2 / 2 |
| Quality of Analysis | 0.5 / 2 |
| Clarity of Language | 1 / 2 |
| Originality | 1.3 / 2 |
| Total | 4.5 / 10 |
My Review and Suggestions:
You have completed the task.
Don't use the quote function option to write the entire discussion of your article.
Your explanation is too shallow, study the discussion more deeply, so you can add more information to your post.
I still get a lot of grammatical errors.
Improve your writing skills even more by studying "Markdown Style Guide".