Hi @chinto1, Thanks for taking my class.
Based on the homework that you have made, here are the details of the assessment you get:
| Explanation of Socios.com Platform | 0.3/1 |
| Effects of Blockchain entering the sports industry | 0.7/1 |
| Personal opinion about Socios.com as an investment vehicle | 0.8/1 |
| Install and explore the Socios.com app | 1.2/2 |
| Fundamental analysis of a fan token | 0.4/2 |
| Conclusion | 0.8/1 |
| Follows Rules and Guidelines | 1/1 |
| Procedures and structure of writing | 0.8/1 |
| Total | 6/10 |
My Reviews and Suggestions:
Your explanation on questions number 1, 2, and 3 is still too shallow. Try to put more information. Especially question number 1, I ask for an explanation regarding Socios.com in detail.
You explain the steps to create an account and the features in the Socios application well. But you don't show proof that your account has been verified on the app.
For an explanation of the fundamental analysis of the fan token that you choose, you should describe it more broadly, because the fundamental analysis is an analysis that requires a lot of data to draw a conclusion in investing.
If you are explaining a news, it would be better if you show a screenshot of the news on your assignment so that the news is more valid.
Don't get into the habit of putting questions using markdown quotes. Use a slightly larger variation of the header so that the question can be seen clearly.
There are some grammatical errors, please correct them.