RE: SLC S21 Week 4 - Herbal Remedies for Energy, Pain Relief, and Mental Clarity

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SLC S21 Week 4 - Herbal Remedies for Energy, Pain Relief, and Mental Clarity

in hive-111300 •  yesterday 

Hi, @fantvwiki, Thank you for participate in the herbal medicine week 4.

Here is the review of your post participation.

1. Energy Boost Tea or Powder: (0.5/2 Mark)

Dear student, you have made an energy boosting tea in which you have used six herbs and you have explained step by step through pictures, but you have not explained the benefits of these six herbs separately.
And it has not been told how these six herbs boost energy together. The six herbs you mentioned above do not mention cinnamon, but you have written cinnamon in the benefits section.
As a Herbalist let me tell you one thing, you can't use so many herbs to make your booster tea, doing so will cause you harm instead of benefits, you can use two or three of them at most, then it will bring better results.

2. Pain-Relief Oil: (1.5/3 Marks)

You have prepared a pain relief oil in which you have used ginger, but you have forgotten to mention the benefits of the oil you have prepared and what pains it will relieve.

3. Mental Clarity Remedy: (1.5/3 Marks)

Here you have prepared mental clarity remedy, you have told the method of making it step by step through pictures, here again you have not told that this remedy which you have prepared.
What are its health benefits and how does it help with mental clarity?

4. Accuracy and Creativity: (1/2 Marks)

You have worked hard but not considered the questions. When you are writing something related to human health, there is no room for error. You know that with a little mistake, we can become sick instead of healthy.

I hope you have learned a lot about herbal medicine.

Total Marks4.5/10
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Thank you for your time, this is really helpful advice and teaching for me.

  1. Energy Boost Tea or Powder.
    I use only tea leaves and cinnamon. Only 2.

  2. Pain-Relief Oil.
    Yes, that part may have to be more detailed for me to explain, thanks for the advice.

  3. Mental Clarity Remedy
    I have to reread it, this could be a useful insert for me going forward.

  4. Accuracy and Creativity.
    Agree sir, a little mistake, we can become sick instead of healthy. The importance of providing information on the effects of the use of herbal remedies, because different bodies respond differently. We all need research, not just faith. Explanation of side effects is also very useful, not a matter of conjecture but research results.

Overall, I can learn a lot from your verification. It's very useful for me.

Thanks again and best regards to you.