Hello @sur-riti

The post with the [results] (( https://steemit.com/hive-113376/@joslud/winners-desafio-escribe-en-tamano-micro) )has already been published.

Evaluation

With a cool head, I think it is a linear story, without twists or surprises, but a good story.
A suggestion could be to risk going beyond the established, giving the protagonist another personality and values.

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RÚBRICA DE EVALUACIÓN

Participante: @sur-riti

Total de palabras usadas (relato + titulo): 96 + 4 : 100

Puntuación Obtenida: 19

Aspecto	🤔 (1 pt)	😃 (2 pt)	🤩 (3 pt)
Extensión (N° pal)		2
Inicio			3
Trama		2
Final	1
Redacción - Ortografía		2
Reflexión sobre el proceso		2
Autoevaluación: Usa los criterios		2
Evalúa otros relatos (2) los criterios		2
Cumplió reglas generales			3

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