In the eye of the storm

Chapter 2:

The sisters-cousin-fiancée-secretary- Dogs-body

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Plot:

now this chapter made it like a real movie, I can say he put a lot of actions other than words here which is very good for the type of novel his writing.

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Setting:

well the way he started the chapter didn’t well rate it accurately well because I was a bit confused he skip some part in my own prospective.

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Characterization:

“actions speak louder than words” they say and is indeed true. Lilly’s thoughts in this chapter was fabulous her thoughts are just like actions and he pretty well put them together at the time the reader will expect it
10 out 10 for this.

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Play;

a man in the village found a body, Lilly went alone to see if that was mr Ambrose. On getting there it was a woman taking care of him as so she thought , until the woman introduced her daughter to Lilly. Lilly didn’t like the girl at first sight and neither did the girl too like her too. The girl asked so many questions to Lilly one them being “who is the man to you” that’s where Lilly amazing thoughts come in , after the crazy thoughts she says “my cousin “. The girl knowing they don’t look in any way the same began saying things which are not her business. Lilly requested to see the man and praying it will be rikkard Ambrose then this happened the girl started to act like the man was in love with her making Lilly jealous and told her to wait outside the room , maybe the man doesn’t want to see her says the girl, but all the questions asked by the girl to the man inside the room was heard by Lilly on the outside but all the answers were silence . That’s how we know rikkard Ambrose from storm and silence always cold.
Let’s see if the man is truly rikkard Ambrose.
RobTheir really is giving out yellow cards to keep readers at suspension.