What is the correct sentence? – Mini contest #1

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Hello everyone in Steem kids and parents community, I hope we are all having a great week.

I love solving puzzles, quizzes, ciphers, quantitative reasonings and unscrambled words...it keeps me on my toes and allows me to think logically.

I came across a mini contest by @patjewell and immediately I was in love with the contest. Though it is a mini contest, but the rules allows us to make a post and I wish to make one in the community.

English Language, which is spoken by a lot of people is generally accepted as an official language in Nigeria. Though our native language does affect the way we read and pronounce but we still use the English Language well.

Making a sentence from unscrambled words could be taxing but I love things that demand a lot of reasoning.

The first step in scrambling these words was to write out all the 15 words in a book. I started with words I felt could begin a sentence and I had a lot of options, it became confusing at some point but I answered it regardless.

The words are shown in the picture below gotten from the post:

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The fifteen words above were rearranged perfectly and I am 60% sure this would be the correct sentence. I really do hope I get it right:

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IN THE MODERN WORLD, PEOPLE ARE ASSESSED ON UNFAIR ASSUMPTIONS WHICH ARE DRAWN FROM APPEARANCE.

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This should probably be the correct sentence, after I tried up to 16 sentences, this was the best one that sounded right and correct.

Thanks for going through my post, I invite @imohmitch, @basil20 and @nsijoro to take part in this contest.

After 7 days, I will be back to know if I won the contest @patjewell. Thanks once more for this wonderful contest.