This poem is such a splendid depiction of profound vulnerability. This lover of yours undoubtably imprinted their soul onto yours, leaving you scarred yet healed, broken yet at one with your current predicament. The back and forth changing of themes - speaking on how you miss the physical body of the person, followed by a deep longing for unity with what seems to be the a personification of imperishable love - truly translates your missing and details the suffering. Well done!
If you are interested and have some free time, I invite you over to my page to check out some of my poetry.
Thanks for sharing,
Luka.
It's amazing what you say, I like the fact that you felt all this, because as you say it, I wanted this poetry to be felt.
Thank you very much, and of course, I'm going to visit your blog.
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You managed to do so wonderfully!
Thank you very much!
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